Super Sally swam in the sea
Smiling and strolling slowly, she snatched seashells
Sneakily, small snails slithered along the sand
Slimy sticky signs along the shore
The signs screamed, “Slow down!”
Samantha the silly seagull squawked
Swiftly Samantha got a slimy fish
Struggling, the slimy fish slipped away
What a great job you have done! You have painted the picture in my head - a clever writing strategy
ReplyDeleteHi Kendra. You have used great alliteration in your poem. As Ms Twigley said, it really paints a picture in the readers mind. I wonder if you will be able to use this same strategy when you are writing stories? From Mrs Brunning.
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Brunning
DeleteThanks for the feedback.
I didn’t think of using it in my stories. Thank for reading my poem.
From Kendra
nice allitaration
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