Matthew's writing goal is to use speech marks, ellipses and commas for lists. You can see he is using speech marks and ellipses in this text. He sent me his writing, and I asked him to revise it to add more detail, which he did, and now his story is a lot more interesting. Ka rawe Matthew!
It was great to see that you revised your first piece of writing Matthew and went back and made it better. You chose a great photo too. I have been to the Grand Canyon and I can see how you could easily fall as there are no fences in parts! Ka pai!
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